Dear, Promise

     Reading your paper was a lot of fun because you were able to explain your evidence clearly and direct. It is important that one recognizes the other side or point of view of others and you did an amazing job at acknowledging their views and reasons as to why they would view things that way. Even though you did great in these parts there were still some things I noticed in your paper that I would like to point out and one of those things were having page numbers. In MLA format one must have their last name and the page number of the page on the right top corner, I noticed that none of your pages there was no page number that indicated which page it was so next time please remember that. I also notice that there was no introduction paragraph in your paper which is an important paragraph that your paper must have. Besides from those two things I would like to suggest saving some concluding sentences for the conclusion instead of having them at the end of every body paragraph because it would just seem like you are coming to a conclusion for every paragraph.

                                                                                                                                                               Sincerely,

                                                                                                                                                             Celibel Capellan